This is the first half of the prolog to Convergence, to give you an idea of the style and mood. I posted it to my Dropbox sight.
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/63198687/Convergence/Convergence%20-%20Prologue.pdf(Combined all of prologue into one file... See below)
Let me know what you think. If you are interested in working on it as a manga, feel free to make a frame or two. I haven't really put much thought into what Lil and Owen look like, thought Owen should probably have a tatoo visible somewhere, and dark hair.